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Chapter 471

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    "Boyfriend, husband, none of them, but have a child? To be honest, I have never been in touch."

    "I am."

    "Writer Lark, do you know what the heroine Dong Qiong'er of Gongdou Opera is talking about with the rich second-generation actor Chen Haofu? Looking at the screen, it looks like an ancient time-travel drama, and a modern time-travel drama. Could it be that the competition item is,  Writers merging in pairs? Engaging in time travel?"

    "I'm not sure. At first, I thought they were ex-girlfriends, and they looked very familiar and a little shy. Writer Turtle, do you think so too?"

    "Now there is no one in private, can you help me see if there is anything that needs to be revised in the novel I just wrote?"

    "I'm not that talented."

    "You can help me take a look, just give me some advice, writer Lark, I'm really sorry for your inconvenience."

    "When you write about the pain of youth, do you mean that the man and the woman are separated from the beginning? Isn't it the pain? The readers still have a good impression that there is no protagonist. In the end, you want them all to be separated. Who would the reader be?"  I like it, I have no impression of the hero and heroine, if I want to feel pain, I can't feel pain at all, okay?"

    "Then you mean, I should change the beginning? Turn it into a happy picture, and then there will be pain? But the emotional color is not as strong as it is now."

    "No way, anyway, I just like beautiful things now, and you will feel pain when you come up. I definitely can't accept it, no matter what age group you target. Middle-aged, old, and young, as long as they have a normal mind, they all look forward to beautiful things. Just  For example, if you write about the pain of youth, you must be very energetic, so when you first write about who is going to be cremated, and then wake up and be reborn later, why do I feel like who wrote it?"

    "Like what I wrote, reincarnation and reincarnation novels. Anyway, if you have nothing to do, let's see that you are all godmothers."

    "Writer Yuchilan? That's great. I really didn't expect you, a famous writer like you, to be able to discuss issues with us. Come and help me find out what's wrong with me."

    "Turtle writer, it seems that you don't need me anymore? Then I'm leaving?"

    "Writer Lark, together with Writer Elephant, help me take a look. It's best for everyone to give some personal opinions, okay?"

    "Ok, no problem."

    "Writer Elephant, you are too hearty, so now, please speak."

    "Actually, there is not much problem with your writing as a whole. If you write it as a dream, instead of being pushed into the furnace, will it resonate with readers more?"

    "But what I wrote was about a girl who always rarely speaks in a social tone. Finally, one day, she was killed by her own cleverness and passed away. But the second before she died, she miraculously woke up and walked back to the campus.  inside."

    "Then yours is equivalent to rebirth, it is not youth pain."

    "I want a novel idea, because now there are a lot of character designs, I have polished them all, and finally I decided that we should introduce new ones. Only in this way will there be a big development and stand out all at once. For example, here, girls used to use social  Her boyfriend didn¡¯t come down to pick her up, which led to her death in a car accident, but she regained it once again and decided to abandon the hypocritical mask"

    "Everyone, please pay attention, a new round of pairing of writers starts now." (Remember the website URL: www.hlnovel.com
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