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Chapter 185 How to Write Materials that Satisfy the Leader

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    Vice President Yuan called Yu Daozhen and Lin Ziyao to the office as soon as he came back from a business trip.

    The company's annual meeting will be held the day after tomorrow. Vice President Yuan was a little impatient, and asked the two of them, "How is it? Have you changed my speech materials?"

    Yu Daozhen said respectfully and without losing his integrity: "Xiao Lin worked overtime for a few days, and revised another draft. Please look over it to Mr. Yuan."

    Lin Ziyao was moved. Yu Daozhen gave her the opportunity to show her face in front of the leaders.

    Hearing that Lin Ziyao was working overtime to catch up on the draft, Mr. Yuan's face improved a little, as if his child was being treated by the teacher at school, and he always felt an inexplicable peace of mind.

    Lin Ziyao obediently offered the materials with both hands.

    "You guys sit down for a while." Mr. Yuan pointed to the sofa in the office and said.

    Yu Daozhen was sitting a little casually. Last night, in order to complete the manuscript for the magazine, she wrote the manuscript until late at night. She had to rely on coffee to hang herself all morning. Now that most of the morning has passed, she is sitting on the soft sofa again, feeling a little sleepy.  Yu Daozhen yawned involuntarily.

    Science says that yawning is contagious, and Lin Ziyao, who has been working overtime for several days, also yawned.

    On the contrary, Vice President Yuan, who came back from a long-distance business trip, was in high spirits, not tired.

    It so happened that Yin Qiuhan came to look for Vice President Yuan at this time, but was stopped by Vice President Yuan's secretary Wen Xin.

    "Manager Yu of the Legal Department and Lin Ziyao are inside." Wen Xin said.

    Yin Qiuhan's situation turned around very quickly, and she immediately said: "I'm not here to look for Mr. Yuan, I'm here to look for you."

    "Looking for me?" Wen Xin asked with a smile.

    "Here, here are some gadgets." Yin Qiuhan put an inconspicuous little bag on Wenxin's desk.

    Yin Qiuhan turned around and just blocked the bag so that others could not see it.

    Yin Qiuhan always gave Wenxin some small gifts from time to time because Wenxin was the secretary of Yuan's vice president;  Undeclared maintenance of a specific friendship between each other.

    "This is a limited edition, so it's hard to buy." Wen Xin's eyes lit up again and again.

    What Yin Qiuhan gave Wen Xin was a tf four-color lipstick set, a gift that was delivered to the heart, Yin Qiuhan knew what women like too well.

    Yin Qiuhan winked at Wenxin and said, "These four colors are very suitable for you."

    "Thank you, I've searched for several purchasing agents but can't find it." Wen Xin smiled happily.

    It is too expensive, I am reluctant to buy it, Yin Qiuhan thought to himself.

    "I'm leaving first." Yin Qiuhan glanced at Vice President Yuan's office before leaving.

    Wen Xin gently put the gift into the drawer of her desk.

    Vice President Yuan couldn't say that there was anything wrong with this material, but he just felt that it should be revised.

    Lin Ziyao saw that Vice President Yuan's face was not happy, so he knew that Vice President Yuan still wanted to change the material. As a leader, he always likes to let his subordinates change the material.  What's more, Wen Wu is the first and Wu Wu is the second. She hasn't figured out what kind of writing style Vice President Yuan likes.

    "Come here." Vice President Yuan beckoned to Yu Daozhen and Lin Ziyao.

    "Mr. Yuan, let me first report to you my thoughts on revising this material." Lin Ziyao said suddenly.

    Vice President Yuan was also quite interested. He relaxed on the chair and said, "Tell me."

    "Sit down, sit down and talk." Vice President Yuan said, pointing to the chair in front of him.

    Lin Ziyao opened the notebook, and there were many words densely written in the notebook, like notes and experience.

    Both Vice President Yuan and Yu Daozhen caught a glimpse of Lin Ziyao's notebook.

    Lin Ziyao remained calm and said: "The first draft I wrote to Mr. Yuan was too specific. I only thought that Mr. Yuan led our legal department and the personnel department to do so much work, and we should show all the work achievements to  People from the whole company see it, so the work is basically comprehensive. Later, Mr. Yuan said that the writing was too specific and not macroscopic enough. I went back and thought about it. I really didn¡¯t stand enough. I only stood from the perspective of an ordinary employee.  Considering the problem at the same level, planning the article, the height and vision of the article are really not enough. After Mr. Yuan's advice, I went back and revised the first draft, but I still didn't fully understand the meaning of Mr. Yuan's second draft, so I wrote  It is too macroscopic and too empty, which shows that our legal department and human resources department have too little real work, and they are all talking about fake and empty things, and I misunderstood the meaning of President Yuan."

    Yu Daozhen glanced sideways at Lin Ziyao, who was reporting in a serious manner, and then at Vice President Yuan, who occasionally showed a bewildered smile, thinking that as a subordinate, he still had a little bit of skill in flattering, at least better than himself, and he was quite able to give the leader  Put gold on your face.

      "I thought about it for a few days, and watched the speeches made by the big boss at the company's annual meeting in recent years. I found that the big boss prefers to quote verses, and also likes to use parallel sentences and make some special formulations, such as  The year before last, he said that our company adopted the "4321" working method, and the year before last that our company used the "addition, subtraction, multiplication and division" working method, and last year we used a series of parallel sentences." Lin Ziyao said while looking at his notebook.

    "So, I thought, can we rely on the style of writing of the big boss, wear hats and shoes for a macro perspective, and be more specific in the middle, add some characteristic innovations, and try our best to show that our legal department and human resources department are under the leadership of the company.  , under the direct leadership of Vice President Yuan, the achievements made in work in the past year." Lin Ziyao said.

    When Vice President Yuan heard this, he felt that what Lin Ziyao said was very reasonable. Why didn't he think that his work report materials should be favored by the big boss?  stood out.

    Thinking of this, Vice President Yuan became more and more satisfied with the material in front of him.

    In fact, this principle is not difficult, but few people in the enterprise will carefully ponder this kind of official document writing. Most of them are rigid and rigid.

    "Okay, this material is well written, and this material will be used in the annual meeting the day after tomorrow." Vice President Yuan immediately made a decision and set the tone.

    Lin Ziyao took out another copy of the material and said, "Mr. Yuan, this is a simplified version. It takes half an hour to get down to the big concept. You can see if you need it."

    "Okay, Comrade Xiao is very thoughtful, put it here, I'll take a look again." Vice President Yuan was obviously very satisfied with Lin Ziyao's performance.

    Although Yu Daozhen was still expressionless, she was secretly nodding in her heart.

    Ruzi can be taught, this is Yu Daozhen's comment on Lin Ziyao.

    Yu Daozhen and Lin Ziyao walked out of Vice President Yuan's office one after the other, and Lin Ziyao asked Yu Daozhen in a low voice: "Shouldn't it be changed again?"

    Yu Daozhen frowned, then let go of it immediately, and said, "Probably not, you should concentrate on finishing the contract in hand."

    "Okay." Lin Ziyao nodded, but complained in his heart, as the manager himself, he really wouldn't let her go for a moment.  (Remember the site URL: www.hlnovel.com
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