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    bad woman

    Author: Stir-Fried Cucumber

    [No v, short story, update frequency depends on the number of comments]

    She has a pure, kind, pitiful little face.

    She dyed her hair light blonde, and painted her lips a pinkish pink; she likes white lace, white pearls, white gloves, all accessories that can set her off pure and flawless.

    She put on her flat shoes and walked into the resplendent dance floor with feigned unease.

    She is as cunning as a wolf, as fierce as a lion, and as vicious as a snake.

    Her goal is clear, and every playboy is an immovable prey in her eyes¡ª¡ª

    The original story of "The Evil Girl" next door, the bad woman tears up the scumbag man, and there is no male protagonist

    Content tags: Western Romance

    Search keywords: Protagonist: Dolly (Dolores) ©§Supporting role: ©§Others:

    One sentence introduction: Women should live beautifully with melodious temperament

    ?Concept: If you love, come here, if you don't love, don't be arrogant, put away your little flowery intestines

    The hostess and settings of this article are good. It¡¯s rare that there is a Suwen article whose main line is male abuse. The male here is a false finger. To be honest, if the delineation range is among the top scumbags above, I don¡¯t feel much.  Every time I think about it, I have to contact them so much in the early stage in order to fight against abuse in the later stage, and sometimes I have to attack them first, which is really disappointing.

    However, this article has a disadvantage that the writing is too gorgeous, because the characters and lines are very delicate, and the various descriptions are also extremely exaggerated. Sometimes it is easy to get tired if the style is not well grasped. The writing is really not more gorgeous.  the better.  In the past few years, Su Wenli has been filled with too many adjectives, and he loves to pile up rhetoric too much. I still hope to be a little more restrained in writing. Too much exaggeration is really easy to be hypocritical.  The style of writing still needs to pay attention to the appropriateness. The places that should be simple are simple, and the places that need more pen and ink can be freely swayed.  A good writing style is to be able to grasp the overall situation of the article on the one hand, and to highlight the characteristics of the author on the other hand, and to find a balance between the two. Don't blindly pursue magnificence, and don't blindly pursue plainness, just "don't use words to harm the meaning".

    Playing Miracle Nikki-Dress UP Queen and wearing clothes for the sake of getting better points is easy to get hot eyes, and it is limited to Su Wen. I think that if you want to write about beauties, you should pay more attention to the description of beauties and the creation of heart-warming scenes. It depends on just meeting  The aesthetic feeling brought by the visual impact is still a bit shallow.  And if you consider the reader's sense of substitution, in fact, the cute side of girls in some very life-like scenes will be more poignant. Here, you can jump out of the perspective of gender relations, without such a complicated aesthetic feeling, the simpler the better.  One school in chick films is that a sparrow turns into a phoenix, that kind of transformed goddess feeling Su.  There is also a faction such as "Leading the Coquettish" and "Legal and Pretty Woman". The heroines are cute and cute. Wearing some floral skirts and being happy can make people feel Su. There is really no need for such complicated settings.  Family background, black suitors and campus bullying, this kind of setting is really overused!  Believe me, just like watching the hero¡¯s mental journey before transformation in super-English movies, watching this kind of counterattack against Su Wen, if the depression period is not written well or is too long, it will be very annoying, even Su Wen will be annoying.  (Remember the site URL: www.hlnovel.com
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