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    After reading "The Complete Works of Xu Zhimo", one of the translated "Flowers of Evil Dead Corpse" is very good. After comparison, I found that the difference is really too big. There is something inherent in the dead corpse, which is very strong, extremely decayed and  The coexistence of extremely tenacious vitality is a state that Xu Zhimo's poems cannot reach at all, but it is impossible to say why this is so.  The last poem in the anthology is Xu Zhimo¡¯s adaptation of another poet¡¯s poem. The two poems were published together. After comparison, I found that Xu Zhimo¡¯s poems are better.

    Regarding the rhythm of writing poems, in fact, I couldn¡¯t understand any key points after searching over and over again. When I was completely desperate for this, I wrote a poem by hand last night and found that it was quite similar. Come to think of it, the poems I have read can¡¯t be seen.  It has already had a certain influence on the people who read it.

    I don¡¯t know if it¡¯s right or not. Some insights: When writing poems, use parallelism more, write scenery at the beginning, intersperse scenery in the middle, and express emotions in the last paragraph. Use imagination and metaphors as much as you can throughout the whole process. A poem can be divided into many sections.  Before the last stanza, each stanza can be partially repeated. Usually, the first sentence is repeated, and a part of it is repeated later, and some words are changed in some parts. However, this method seems to be just filling in words, which is not very clever. There is a poem format that is,  The beginning and the end are repeated, or the end expresses the beginning part backwards, which can be regarded as the echo of the beginning and the end.  Another point of understanding is that each stanza is a similar aspect, just like a petal of a lotus flower with a lotus stamen at the end, so each stanza is a complete section of content, and the structure between each stanza is similar  , this should be a metrical echo.

    The last thing I want to say is that Xu Zhimo¡¯s poems have no atmosphere of the era he lived in. Some of them are romantic, poetic and picturesque, and they are beautiful, and they do not reflect the turbulent era.  He, because he did not dedicate his talent to the times, but to poetry, this is the freedom of choice.  (Remember the site URL: www.hlnovel.com
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