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Title: Excessive packaging should also be prevented for fine melons and fruits (Author: Zhuang Dianyi)
According to the definition of comments, the objects of comments can be current publicity items, or some noteworthy problems that are usually found. This article should be a comment on some bad phenomena that are usually observed, and it should be aimed at the problem.
Article structure analysis:
Introduction. List some everyday phenomena that are commonly noticed.
Text. Analyze and classify phenomena into simple categories.
further analysis.
Comments. Clearly point out the point of view - the practice of labeling and bagging agricultural and sideline products is enough.
? Analyze the reasons for the bad labeling and bagging. Be organized when you speak.
It cannot be denied all the time, and the same is true for bad atmosphere. So this paragraph is an analysis of some positive parts of labeling and bagging.
At the end, the supervision of relevant departments.
Summary of knowledge: Nowadays, many agricultural and sideline products such as vegetables and fruits are labeled and bagged, but they are not necessary, but because the merchants pursue sales and profits. Of course, the labeling and bagging of some fruits and vegetables also have certain value. Some bagging can achieve the purpose of keeping fresh, and some labels can prevent counterfeiting.
Summary: Phenomena, what are these phenomena about, what is the essence, what are the suggestions and opinions.
Re-summary: phenomenon, analysis, comment + analysis, suggestion, ending. (probably so)
Title: Live Streaming Industry Standards Help Bring Goods Better (Author: Wang Xudong)
? This should be a short review. Use a very short text to comment. As for whether the review is good or not, I really dare not say, because I have not yet reached the level of understanding whether a review is good or not. But I also know who the author is, so it should be good, but I still can't understand it with my current ability.
Structural analysis:
Introduction. Ask two consecutive questions, then tell the incident, and the object of the comment is live broadcast.
Text. The achievement data in live streaming is a good aspect.
The bad aspect of live streaming. Therefore, in fact, most of the mode of the text is to analyze the quality of the comment object. In the process of analysis, there are data support, and the logical analysis and opinions of the commentators.
end. Suggestions are put forward for the views and insights of the new economy of live streaming. This part is very short, but this part should test the ability of the commentator.
General Knowledge: The State Administration for Market Regulation has issued a public consultation draft on the regulation of online transactions. The emergence of industry standards for the regulation of online transactions will have a good impact on the regulation and safety of online live streaming. (It should mean that)
Summarize:
Ask questions and write the object of the comment;
The positive aspect of the comment object is supported by data;
Comment on the bad aspect of the object, and then analyze the benefits of the new incident, so the bad aspect is actually a kind of background information;
? Viewpoints and Suggestions.
To sum up: I don¡¯t know how the analysis method is, but the author¡¯s position is very high when it comes to network supervision, online live streaming, and new economy and new business formats.
Work: False publicity of Internet celebrity attractions should be severely punished (Author: Jiang Debin)
This should also be a short review, but the method used in this review is somewhat different from the above two articles. The above mode is roughly: put forward the event or the object of the comment, then analyze (good and bad aspects), and finally some comments and suggestions. The pattern here is: start with general commentary on an event, then move up to higher objects with a bit more scope for commentary, then very brief comments and recommendations. So the main difference between them is that the last one obviously sees the big from the small in terms of technique, judging from the small to the big.
Structural analysis:
Introduction: The real scene of "Mirror of the Sky" in a scenic spot in Wulin, Hunan is too different from the promotional film, and the local area conducts false propaganda in order to attract tourists.
Text. The origin of the "mirror of the sky", an example of successfully creating the "realm of the sky".
?Analyzed Wulin's "The Realm of the Sky" and came to the conclusion that it is false propaganda.
The topic has been upgraded to disclose the phenomenon of false propaganda of tourist attractions in recent years.
Comment on the false propaganda incidents of tourist attractions and give some suggestions. Objects involved: Relevant departments have taken a lot of actions to rectify the false propaganda of scenic spots. It is suggested that the local area should not deceive tourists and carry out false propaganda.
Summary of knowledge: The "mirror of the sky" in Wulin, Hunan is fake, true??"Land of the Sky" In Bolivia, Chaka is the "Land of the Sky" in China. Now there are quite a lot of Internet celebrity attractions that are exaggerated by the locals, with the purpose of attracting tourists. This kind of imagination is quite serious.
Summarize:
Comment on a specific case;
Rise to social phenomena or industry phenomena, and then make comments. (Remember the site URL: www.hlnovel.com - Didn't finish reading? Add this book to your favoritesI'm a member and bookmarked this chapterCopy the address of this book and recommend it to your friends for pointsChapter error? Click here to report
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