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    Accidentally found the WeChat cache file of an employee who used to use this computer in the unit computer, and found the copywriting of the previous video project of the channel, which should be written by lz.

    Compared with the published version, there is a world of difference.  Comparing the two versions one by one, the content is almost exactly the same, but the order of the text has been adjusted, which is really amazing.  Thinking about it again, the unreleased version has detailed time for each stage, it looks very boring, like chewing wax, it looks like it was written by someone who has spent time and time, but has no pen and ink; the released version adjusts the order of some paragraphs,  The specific time is removed, and some other trivial things are removed. There are only one or two specific times. If you can not use the specific time, you don¡¯t use it.  Let the whole article appear calm and connotative, which also highlights the author's overall grasp and insights on this.

    So, is the general text showing the author's opinion?  The text of specific time and place is the concrete embodiment of the event, it just shows that the author knew about it, and it is the general text that really reflects the author's thoughts, but what is really worthwhile in the text is the author's thoughts.  Perhaps it is the same in non-news writing, whether it is literature or journalism.  (Remember the site URL: www.hlnovel.com
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