"Wang Miao felt that the four people who came to him were a strange combination: two policemen and two soldiers. It would be normal if the two soldiers were armed police, but these were two army officers."
After reading the first paragraph of the opening chapter of "The Three-Body Problem", Tranquility was completely aroused.
She is a professional screenwriter.
At the same time, because of Chen Ping'an's relationship, I studied and researched the writing skills of novels with Chen Ping'an, a master.
There is an extremely important skill in novel writing.
That is to use hooks.
A hook can be any means to arouse the reader's interest, such as this passage, "a strange combination" is a hook. After reading this sentence, the reader will think what kind of strange combination it is, so read the next sentence.
Two policemen and two soldiers.
This is also a hook.
What did the police and soldiers come to him for?
Forces the reader to continue reading.
Then it was "It would be normal if the two soldiers were armed police, but these are two army officers."
"Army Officer" is another strong hook.
In just a short paragraph, three powerful hooks appeared. And it shows a trend of layer upon layer enhancement.
To lure readers, they must read on.
"As expected of Anshen! As expected of my master! As expected of squid!! It's amazing!" Tranquility admired Chen Pingan so much at this moment.
So skillful in the use of hooks.
? A short paragraph not only aroused great reading interest of readers, but also established the tense tone of the following.
Army officers have come to the door, can the following plot not be tense?
Such a wonderful beginning!
After reading such an opening, Tranquility seems to have a sense of epiphany. For the creation of novels, she gained a lot and gained a deeper understanding.
This kind of understanding is also very meaningful in script creation.
No wonder he became a writer at the level of a great god.
She muttered in her heart.
She can't wait to read the following.
"Wang Miao didn't like the policeman who came to him at first glance"
The opening of the second paragraph strengthens the "tension" tone established by the first paragraph. Tranquility, who has been completely 'hooked', followed the squid's strokes, looking down smoothly and irresistibly.
After two days of "retreat", Chen Pingan has written more than 100,000 words.
Tranquility's reading speed is very fast, and it took less than half an hour to read the existing manuscripts.
Chen Jiajia and Yang Bo were slower, but it only took an hour to finish watching them all.
The four people who had finished reading the manuscript surrounded Chen Pingan, anxiously waiting for every word he typed.
Before, it was Chen Pingan and Wu Zixuan who forgot to eat and sleep, day and night.
Now Yang Bo, Chen Jiajia, and Tranquility have joined the camp.
After writing for three days in a row, Chen Pingan finally felt tired.
He stopped typing on the keyboard, got up and stretched.
He didn't want to write anymore.
Want to rest and rest.
Until now he found that apart from Wu Zixuan, Yang Bo and the others were also in the room, he was a little surprised.
"Why are you all surrounded in my room?" Chen Pingan asked.
"Reading novels." Yang Bo raised the typed draft in Yang's hand, "Chen Pingan!! You are a squid, why didn't you tell me earlier??? Liar!"
"I told you." Chen Pingan shrugged, "But you don't believe me, what can I do?"
Yang Bo thought for a while, and it seemed to be the case.
Chen Pingan had told himself several times, but he thought this guy was joking.
Really! ! !
It made me chase "Zhu Xian" so hard.
This grandson!
If you had known earlier, you had to put a knife around his neck and let him type. Well, there is resurrection Baguio!
I missed the previous opportunity, and it is not too late to seize it now.
"Who told you to tell lies every time?" Yang Bo teased and asked, "Why don't you write any more?"
"Take a break." Chen Pingan stretched his body, "There are enough manuscripts saved, write slowly."
"Sit down." Yang Bo directly pressed Chen Pingan on the chair, "Continue writing."
Chen Pingan looked at Yang Bo in surprise.
This guy is about to go to the house to expose the tiles?
I just don't writeThey all looked over.
"Is he crazy?"
"have no idea!"
"It's probably not far from crazy."
Colleagues whispered.
At this time another editor asked: "Eggplant, what's wrong with you?"
"New book! New book! New book!" Eggplant repeated three times in a row, "Squid's new book is here!"
Hear this.
The office fell into a brief silence.
Afterwards, all the editors gathered around to watch Squid's new work
ps: Three chapters in one. A total of more than 6000 words. Ask for a recommendation ticket, ask for a monthly ticket, ask for a reward. Because squid has written several books before, but each time I feel that there is no big breakthrough in writing. So this time I used the perspective of Wu Zixuan, Yang Bo, Tranquility and others to write "The Three-Body Problem", which is a new attempt. The author doesn't know whether the writing is good or not, if you think it is good, please give some recommendation tickets and monthly tickets.
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