It ended abruptly, but it did come to an end, and it was time to stop. In the initial outline, Xiao Meng and Xiao Sang were angry at the Golden Emperor, ending with a bloody battle, but most of the time, the more The more I write, the more I feel the horror of the Golden Emperor's scheming city, and the firm pursuit of the Dao. It is impossible for such a boss like the other side to let himself fall into such an ending. The mechanism is too clever, and he should be the one who wants to be as strong as the heart on the road. Therefore, the final climax cannot be achieved, and the ending cannot be hearty. For a creator, it is too painful to have both fish and bear's paws.
However, I finally decided to respect the character of the Golden Emperor, the villain who supports the next third of the story, and the character and setting of the character. Consider where you want to improve and improve your shortcomings.
Mieyun is a complete story of xinxing cultivation, there is no rest. I wrote my heart with my hand, so I wrote the fairy tale, but there are too many things missing, such as writing style, plot design, rhythm control, character shaping, these may have flashes However, it is still too ordinary and thin overall, so the Arcane God Throne is dominated by world view decryption, the rhythm control is very good, the fine structure is higher than that of Mieyun, and the characters have also improved, but it is not enough, and the fighting is also weak.
With these conclusions, the original intention of I was to write about people and ideas. In the first half of the happy world, I felt that the characters, fights, conflicts, detectives, suspense, ideas, passion, joy, etc. had written a new level and broke through. I used to be myself, but after stepping into the location, the fighting first became empty. Gao Wuliu's confrontation had too many problems that I hadn't encountered and didn't expect. The world view is gradually revealed, the conflict of previous styles, the integration of past characters are new problems, and the more grand background, more character games, and more detailed clues, need to rack their brains, and it is difficult to take care of other things. Unless you can use another chapter in two or three days, so while maintaining the main body is still good, many advantages in the early stage are gone.
These things are not something that can be thought of in the initial outline. Only when you write it will you understand it, and you will know how to solve it when you encounter it. I am very good, but there are indeed many problems that need to be summarized.
Fortunately, the Da Neng Game has finally come to a successful conclusion. I am very satisfied with this. The content of nearly 4.5 million words can achieve this level. I feel good about myself. I just hope to summarize more. The next book Improve again.
And the most satisfying characters in this book are Xiaomeng, Jinhuang, and Xiaosang. Xiaosang was originally a secondary role for a girl I knew before. There was only one request, and it was written as a female villain. I looked at Yulong Zi I suddenly felt that neuropathy is also cute, so she became schizophrenic, and then let me extend a series of inspirations, with the layout of the Golden Emperor, if it wasn't for this accident, maybe the life you saw would not be like this that's it.
Many people may not like Xiao Sang, but at least for me, I think she is the best female character I have ever written, not the most satisfying, but the best. At the end of the seventh volume, Xiao Sang and the Golden Emperor Facing it head-on, when my pride was stripped away bit by bit, I even had the feeling that this character was alive.
To sum up here, first answer some pitfalls that were not filled in the text:
One, what did Zhu Bajie know? With a kind of lustful intuition, it is keenly aware of the adultery between Thor and the demon saint, so it can see that there may be a problem with Thor's true identity, so the old pig must die.
Second, Han Guang and Wang Siyuan were portrayed based on their resourcefulness and exhaustive strategies in the early stage, to show the true will of God after the unveiling has been difficult to ask since ancient times, so there is no role in it, and Han Guang's ending has long been doomed. , Wang Siyuan thought that he got it back by initially figuring out the monsters of the heavens, but in fact it was arranged by the Demon Buddha, and his resistance has always been under the control of the Demon Buddha.
Third, the slough of Kasyapa who escaped is to express the terrifying needs of the Supreme True Buddha. It was taken away by the Monkey King, and the rest is left blank. Just imagine for yourself whether it is possible for him to become a relic in the new era and find a new successor.
Fourth, why did no one go to recite Tang Sanzang's remains after the Battle of Lingshan? Because the other side is balanced and involved with each other, no one dared to move first until they all fell into a chaotic sleep, waiting for the end of the catastrophe, Laojun did nothing, and he couldn't recite it until the legend, so he finally returned early by Monk Sha.
Fifth, the golden cicada carapace was originally used by Meng Qi as a preparation to deal with the Supreme Buddha, but the Buddha was not really transcended, so it was useless.
Sixth, the Buddha did not really transcend the pit. There have been reminders in the early stage that the products of Dao Zun are very powerful. There is Huang Laojun, and Huang Laojun split into Donghuang and Tiandao Monster. , and although the Supreme True Buddha is indeed powerful and weird, Tang Sanzang is much weaker. Meng Qi thought it was because of improvements. When he found that the traces of the Taoist priest were empty, but the imprint of the Buddha still existed, he decided toSome suspect that the Buddha has not transcended, and the Daoist has never made a move. The Buddha has a record of his shots. There is a secret cooperation with the Yuanshi Tianzun that the Demon Buddha revealed before. Therefore, the final battle is predictable, not a whim.
Seventh, as for each era, only one transcended, and the Buddha transcended, why didn't Meng Qi suspect that the people from the other side were striving for the Tao fruit? I forgot to write here, he thought this was the end of the catastrophe, the end of the previous eras, not a single era, maybe there is still a chance.
Eighth, why can't Yuanshi Lingbao do it, but Amitabha and Jinhuang can? That's what Yuan Shi said in the last chapter, they have already transformed their state, eliminated the cause and effect, and waited for the opportunity. They don't have to rush like the Golden Emperor. The emperor must use the six soul flags to cut morality.
Ninth, the state of the demon emperor is slightly equal to that of the Buddha, but she is not restricted, but she is afraid that her previous efforts will be in vain when she shows up. She is waiting for an opportunity. As long as there is another era, she will not be afraid of the end of the catastrophe. The words of the demon sage have hinted .
10. The sequence of the timeline of Conferring the Gods and Journey to the West, first is Conferring the Gods, the Heavenly Emperor proves the other shore, and overwhelms the whole life, then gradually separates from Yuanshi and Daode, and there is a Journey to the West, and then the Demon Lord is instigated by Thunder God to go to heaven, Indirectly pierced the secret of Jianmu fruit, and it didn't take long before the heaven fell, and the other side teamed up, and the monkey took the diamond ring given by Laojun, and at the last moment knocked the seriously injured Tiandi Liantian down from the fairyland, giving him a chance to maintain this era It continued to exist, and finally there was the battle of Lingshan. Amitabha and Bodhi faced the demon saint, and the ancients such as Daode and Yuanshi intervened later. The Vajra Circle and the Seven Treasure Tree were all damaged in this battle.
Of course, after all, it is a serialization of nearly two years, some details before and after will inevitably be confused, and there will be inconsistencies. I don¡¯t know, of course, it can also be explained that Xiaomeng¡¯s painting ability is ¡°uncanny¡±, which is amazing. After drawing a child, even his mother doesn¡¯t know him. Well, these are not related to the main plot, not related to the direction. If you have a chance to publish it, please proofread it again.
Others are the pitfalls of the endings of the characters, some will be on the sidelines, and some will be left blank. By the way, I saw a friend in the book review area saying that it is best to serialize in the book. In order to take care of them, it should be serialized in the book, too. In a free form, take a break, there will be the first character episode at 7 o'clock on Friday night, but I hope everyone can add me *Íþ*ÐÅ*, there will be good jokes, all kinds of brain holes, and waste manuscripts first Look, there are extra episodes that have nothing to do with the first life, such as "If it's a city" tonight, anyway, I will have time to maintain three updates per week in the future~ Just search for my pseudonym, and I don't have the honor of the first life
After summarizing, it¡¯s time to talk about the new book. As I mentioned before, the new book is an urban superpower. Today I can say it more clearly. It is an urban martial arts or fantasy of the King of Fighters type. The level of power will be lowered, allowing me to write characters better. To write a story, use the things I have summarized in my life, and this type of writing is relatively fresh, and there are fewer people writing it, and it will be very creative when written~
Of course, everyone will say that if I don¡¯t die, I won¡¯t die, and I change the subject and field. To be honest, I also know that this is not good, and I will definitely lose a lot of readers. Every time I see others add hundreds of thousands Don¡¯t I envy you, that¡¯s impossible, but I can¡¯t write what I don¡¯t want to write, and I can¡¯t force a smiley face to pretend to be an orgasm to write something that I have no inspiration, no idea, no creative passion story.
It doesn¡¯t matter if you say it is naive or stupid, but I still remember the original intention when I first started coding. I wrote my heart with my hand, and I feel good about writing stories that I can¡¯t wait to share with you. I enjoy creating a world and writing life. A character's satisfaction.
I am not young, but I still feel that I still have dreams in my heart, passion, breath, and stories I want to tell. It has nothing to do with the subject matter or style, but only with my heart!
Just like Xiaomeng said, it¡¯s not a question of whether it¡¯s worth it or not, it¡¯s whether you want it or not!
I am willing, I have no regrets, I am just a big fool!
The new book has been conceived for a long time, and I had some ideas before writing Arcane Art. Of course, what I wanted to write at that time was the flow of science and technology. Unfortunately, the time has passed and the situation has changed, and I no longer have that feeling, but many of the details and plots accumulated at that time can be used. , until now, it has been basically perfected, just waiting to add bricks and tiles, but I have been writing for almost two years, I am really exhausted, my thinking seems to be slow, I need time to rest, and more time to recharge, read good books, and see how others shape characters and how to explain Stories, learned skills and experience, so, two months of rest and recharging, one month of perfect outline and manuscript storage, October 1st, see you in the new book!
Huh, the Lord of the World wrote it in 22 months. Some of my friends went through high school, some of them graduated from college, some of them changed their jobs, and some of them got married like me. Xiaomeng accompanied us through life I am so happy if this book can become a memory of the past for everyone.
Sincerely, salute, see you outside, see you in the new book! (Remember the site URL: www.hlnovel.com)I would be so happy if this book could become a memory of the past for everyone.
Sincerely, salute, see you outside, see you in the new book! (Remember the site URL: www.hlnovel.com