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Chapter 43 Summary and thanks for the Walled City of Kowloon

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    ? To be a human being, you must have a certainty in your heart

    come one by one

    First, the setting of the Kowloon Walled City boxing ring in this volume is based on the work "The Great Hero Reborn" by Mr. Cang Haizhuochengjiu (a great work, and I am far behind as a newcomer)

    In fact, the inspiration, action design, and background of this volume are also inspired by many movies, such as "Provincial and Hong Kong Flag Soldiers" by the Mai Brothers, "Underworld" directed by Johnnie To, the cold weapon literary film "Master", and the "Slaying Wolf" series (  The action design of Zhang Jin beating Wu Jing and Tony Jia has something about Baguazhang, I will talk nonsense?) Kowloon Walled City supernatural legend ghost mother cooking.  Wait, students who like Hong Kong movies must know what I'm talking about.

    However, it is also an online article, so it is naturally more sensitive in this regard, so I am hereby famous, and I have no intention of offending Mr. Cang Hai.  As for whether the plots are similar, readers can judge for themselves.  Book review area with rhythm lock posts (with no expression)

    Second, thanks, thanks to all the book friends in Longkong for recommending me, a little guy who can't even hit the street, more than once, more than one.  Thanks, thanks.

    Thanks to the owner of the Qidian book list for adding this book to the book list. Among them, Yang Chenkong is a big boss. I can see this boss in every book review of Qidian.  Is it really Miss Sister?  (eyes light up)

    Thanks to all the book friends in the book review area for your comments. Every comment of yours has made me experience the fun of codewords. Thank you, thank you very much.  Thanks to every book friend for pointing out the shortcomings of this book. Although for some reasons, I may not modify it or even reply, but I have seen it. Thanks to everyone who sincerely gave my book an opinion.  Thanks to the book friend Moshou Chenggui for the pile of old papers. I can't write those things well (I haven't read many books), and it also gave me some inspiration.  Finally, are you a young lady (looking forward to face)

    Thirdly, to be a human being, you must have a hard time in your heart

    The gap between the book and the book was experienced while writing it. Before writing the battle between Li Yan and Xu Tianci, I watched the hero reborn again.

    How should I put it, the difference between me and Teacher Cang is 10,000 ***.

    The rhythm of the story and the details of the writing are far from each other, every time a reader says.  good.  I feel a little ashamed when I smell like a big hero.

    far from

    But I will be better in the future.

    When this book was 100,000 words, it was highly rated on Youshu.com, far exceeding the actual level of this book.

    ?It may be everyone¡¯s resentment towards Mr. Cang Hai for not writing books, love the house and black, or it may be that there are not many articles of my type at the starting point recently.

    But there is one thing, I have to have a certainty in my heart.

    Moreover, this book is not about Chinese martial arts and Hong Kong.  At least not just Guoshu and Hong Kong.

    ? When I write Chinese martial arts, apart from the feeling of sympathy at the beginning, it is more because I have accumulated a lot of traditional martial arts materials when writing the book, so there is no need to waste it

    4 miscellaneous

    Do not flog the corpse for Cantonese questions, and you will not repeat them in the future. Even if dialects are involved, the amount will be greatly reduced.

    There are many problems in this volume. For example, I buried too many thread ends. Although most of them have ends (are there any holes left unfilled), they are messy!  Because of poor writing skills and unreasonable relaxation, especially in the section with Liansheng, the writing was once floating. This is not a fast-paced and infinite flow of writing!

    This problem is serious, and I will fix it in the next few stories.

    Second, the characterization is not enough, I think it is not enough, there should be something to dig out, but I haven't found it, and the characterization is procrastinated, many characters can be written more concisely and powerfully.

    Third, the rush of time creates false narratives.

    For example, I arranged for Li Yan to fool Prince Le. Originally, this was supposed to be a hot scene, but for some reason, I cut down the roles of these people and replaced the hot scene with a literary play, and I didn't dare to let Li Yan participate in the chaos  Among them, I read the articles of the Author Academy today, and found that I don¡¯t need to write like this at all, which is quite a pity.

    However, in the literary narrative, many book friends thought that Li Yan was really going to betray.

    It has been edited here, so there should be no misreading. Some people think that Li Yan wants to kill Axiu. This is not a problem with book friends, but my problem. People come to read books for pleasure. You can¡¯t explain clearly.  Of course you have to take the blame.

    Third, the character of the protagonist. In fact, I think Li Yan's character is very clear, but after reading it, I feel that it is not very good.  I won¡¯t repeat my writing, but I will also answer some book friends¡¯ questions

    It is about chivalry and martial arts and evil.

    My point of view is that to write a chivalrous character, you must first raise three points of evil spirit!

    I don't quite agree with Mr. Jin Yong's great chivalry, for the country and the people (rational discussion, don't scold)

    A chivalrous man serves the country and the people, so why should he be an official?  Guo Jing and his wife are guarding Xiangyang, and the court is eating dry food?

      The greatness of a chivalrous man does not need to be set off by the cowardice and incompetence of those in power, but is often ruthlessly crushed by the system and morals. A chivalrous man who serves the country and the people has too much Confucian flavor.

    Xia character, big deal.

    Be fierce and fight fiercely, donate righteousness and donate money, and never retreat until death.  Will be used by others, will become a pawn.  He is not a perfect thing, but a sad background under the system and the overall situation.  But it is the most humane thing in China for five thousand years.

    Far away, essays, believe in the horse, Li Yan is not a hero, everyone just smile.

    Other questions, write in the book, everyone asks a lot, some things are not clearly written, you ask, I know that the writing here is not clear, if you want to change it, I will improve, you don¡¯t have to worry, everyone, please bear with me,

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