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    ~Date:~October 19th~

    After reading it, I feel that the current development of the whole story is not clear enough. It may be because the story has just unfolded. The style is different from the general fairy tale works. From this point of view, it is different from the style of magic fantasy.  Very similar.

    Generally speaking, the author's writing style is relatively high. Although the writing style similar to ancient prose seems fresh at first, after reading it for a long time, it seems to be mediocre. Moreover, the author seems to be flirting with the writing style. It might be better if the writing style is more plain.  .

    Now I think one of the outstanding problems is that the author does not have a good grasp of the time in the article. The time of the entire story is a bit confusing, and it seems to be very short, but the story seems to have already developed.  It's very long (of course, this is purely a personal feeling), and the author's entire worldview is not well reflected in the article. Maybe it's because the story just started. The overall development of the story is nothing special, and it's a bit cliche. The story  The suspense settings are not very successful, but some are quite innovative.

    The plot setting of the entire story is not too special right now. The protagonist's ability and luck index are too high, and there are no strong enemies along the way (maybe there will be in the future. To be honest, I can't see clearly the development of Ying Genius now, but  Depending on the situation, there is a high possibility that the protagonist will become an old enemy due to love turning into hatred), and everything comes too easily for the protagonist. If it continues like this, it will have a YY tendency. Of course, in terms of the overall style and the author's current writing style, this article will not be the same.  Taking the yy route will become a bit nondescript, so it¡¯s better to keep the original style.

    There are not many mms appearing at present, and there is no problem of similar characters due to the large number of mms. In addition, it is difficult for boys to grasp the psychology of women. If there are too many mms, there will not be many authors except mm authors who can accurately write mms.  The psychology and relationship between them, so I don¡¯t really recommend that the protagonist become a stallion-shaped or a lover-shaped figure. Although the author of this book will deal with the protagonist, I hope it won¡¯t be too much.

    Lin Ziyan's setting is destined to be a double-edged sword. On the one hand, the protagonist's development path is destined to have twists and turns, which adds to the characteristics of the story and characters in this book. On the other hand, the setting of this character is the mainstream taste of readers today.  One of the taboo settings is that in the end, no matter whether she is Ying Tiancai or the protagonist or dies or whatever, she will attract a lot of scolding from readers.  (As an aside, I personally prefer Lin Ziyan to end up as Ying Genius. This fits the style of the article better. As for how the protagonist can truly get out of her sense of failure in belonging, this is not something I could have predicted.)

    The setting of Shui Lingfeng is relatively average, and her current relationship with the protagonist is between a good friend and a lover (in my personal opinion, if there are not too many mm characters joining, she has a high chance of becoming the number one heroine. This is also  It can be regarded as the general trend of the current mainstream reading style. Although the author's creation is relatively advanced, it cannot be immune to the influence of the mainstream reading trend of readers). Of course, as I said above, the story has just begun, and it is not clear how it will develop. What?  It's all possible, but Shui Lingfeng's impact on the protagonist is foreseeable and worth waiting and seeing.

    As for Feng Tian, ??I personally think that the setting is still not new. He is the protagonist¡¯s best friend or a passing character, and is no different from other novels.

    Speaking of this, I have to mention the two characters in the scene, Tianchi Shuangxiong. They are now one of the suspense and undercurrents in the book. Although their current role is only to trigger the protagonist's adventure, judging from some plots, these two guys  Coming out again in the future will definitely cause a lot of changes.  (Personally, I am optimistic about the settings of these two people. For example, how do they know the clue of the secret treasure house? There may be big plot developments later.)

    Another relatively deep suspense is the old monk at the beginning, although it is not yet known what influence he has on the protagonist (I will not reveal the rest of the suspense at this moment, because it would be meaningless to tell them all.  ).

    There are seven chapters in Yin Yang Tribulation. It seems that finding them all is a long process. I hope nothing too cliche will appear in this process.  It¡¯s just that so far there are no obvious clues consistent with the title, and the protagonist¡¯s development is too smooth now. Setting twists and turns in the future will cause a lot of trouble, and may be a big challenge to the author¡¯s writing style and the reader¡¯s acceptance.  , it is recommended to slowly let the protagonist suffer setbacks and let the protagonist's mind mature (to be honest, the protagonist's character really doesn't like me, it is too childish. If it develops like this, the protagonist's troubles are really unimaginable, and if it always goes so smoothly, the protagonist's character  If the mind continues to develop as it does now, this book will be reduced to a mediocre article).

    Speaking of the entire world and forces of the True Cultivation World, it is not well reflected yet. There is indeed such a moment in the story and then adding it into the story sometimes seems abrupt.

    Of course, my article is purely to find faults with the author. The writing style and other things I mentioned here are naturally a little bit like Wang Po selling melons (we all belong to the centrifugal alliance). Generally speaking, this is an article.??It's a good work, so this article is purely a guide and discussion for readers and authors. The strengths in the article are still up to the readers to discover for themselves after reading it carefully.

    This article is organized by centrifugal alliance theory group

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