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- At noon, July 30, Earth Year 3018, the sun was scorching.
It has been eight years since the opening of the Shenyue World.
"Shenyue" has been completely integrated into the lives of humans on earth and is indispensable. Lingtian City is still the mythical city that all players yearn for. Although its soul character Ling Tian has not appeared for many years, it is still prestigious under the guidance of Yun Mengxin and the assistance of elves, dwarves, Yunfeng, Xiao Qiufeng, and the Three Fallen Kings. Shock the world. Any decision they make is enough to change the pattern of the entire Shenyue world.
The earth today has undergone earth-shaking changes compared to eight years ago. Those energy sources that would cause huge pollution were completely abandoned. Under the leadership of the Li family, the world has entered an era of light energy with almost no pollution. In any region, the all-round light energy purification system has become the most mandatory installation in every country. Standard configuration, and therefore, the earth¡¯s land pollution, air pollution, electromagnetic pollution, water pollution and even noise pollution will be reduced by a huge margin every day, making the living environment of humans on the earth more and more perfect, and life becoming more and more convenient. .
The Li family changed the world and saved the world This is a fact recognized by the whole world.
But they won¡¯t know that what really changes everything is a cute girl who looks to be only about ten years old.
Suhang City is a relatively remote suburban area.
Because of its remoteness, there are very few residents here, and you can only occasionally see one or two solar cars running by leisurely.
On this day, on this street that no one paid much attention to, a pair of men and women who were so bright and stunning came walking.
The man looked to be in his early twenties, wearing sunglasses and a peaked cap. He had a tall figure and an extraordinary temperament. The girls passing by could not help but feel their hearts beat wildly. But when they saw the woman next to him clearly, they would immediately lower their heads, feeling ashamed of themselves. Walk away in a hurry.
The woman was dressed in purple and was only a little shorter than the tall man next to her. She had no makeup on, but her face was like the most beautiful fairy in the heavenly palace in the legend. She was so beautiful that it took your breath away. As her eyes moved, she naturally released an invisible fascination, as if just one look could completely seduce people's souls. And her figure was so enchanting that even witches would be jealous. No matter which direction you looked at it, her curves were breathtakingly beautiful.
Almost all the men who passed by would stop and gape at the moment they saw her. They didn't slowly come back to their senses until she was far away in their eyes, but they didn't dare to chase after her. She was so beautiful that it made people feel ashamed and embarrassed. A touch of blasphemy.
"Why don't you wear a sun hat? It's only three streets, and already twenty-eight cars have collided, and sixty-one people have lost their souls. If this was in a downtown area, it would be okay." Ling Chen put his hands on his head. Behind his head, he muttered.
Qiyue smiled, her pink lips slightly parted, and she said in a soft and charming voice: "Husband, if you keep teasing others like this, they won't listen to you anymore."
The bones in Ling Chen¡¯s body froze, and his steps suddenly became unnatural.
"Where are you taking me?"
"Already arrived."
The two of them stopped. Ling Chen looked up and said in shock: "Orphanage? Why did you bring me here?"
"You'll find out when you go in. There will be a surprise." Qi Yue took Ling Chen's arm and pulled him in.
"Hello, is this Aunt Liu? We are friends of Li Xiaoxue. She should have greeted you ten minutes ago."
The person Qi Yue calls "Aunt Liu" is the director of the orphanage. Her name is Liu Qing. She is in her fifties and has a kind face and kind eyes. Ten minutes ago, she did receive a call from Li Xiaoxue, telling her that two people would come to her place soon. She described them as a handsome guy wearing sunglasses and a super beautiful woman.
After experiencing the shocking incident seven years ago, Li Xiaoxue knew the existence of God, and also understood that "good and evil will be rewarded, and reincarnation of heaven" also exists. Therefore, after the Li Family Group became the world's largest tycoon, she spent huge sums of money on charity every year, and the orphanage was one of the key investment projects. At present, the Li Family Group is not only in China, but also in countless regions around the world. Orphanage built. This orphanage was also funded and built by the Li family.
As the director of this orphanage, Liu Qing has always been conscientious. Although she is an elder, she admires and admires Li Xiaoxue, the most powerful person in the Li family consortium, who controls the world's economic lifeline, but she never dares to expect anything. I'll be lucky enough to meet you one day. But today she actually received a call from her in person, which made Liu Qing so excited that she almost thought she was dreaming. After hanging up the phone, she quickly stood at the door and waited The customer who could make Li Xiaoxue call and explain in person was definitely a big shot who could shock the world.
And when he met Ling Chen and Qi Yue Ling Chen didn't talk about it, only after seeing Qi Yue did Liu Qing know what the "super beauty" Li Xiaoxue said was.It reached such an extent that even a woman of half a hundred years was stunned by it, and she didn't come back to her senses for a long time.
"Aunt Liu?"
It wasn¡¯t until Qi Yue spoke again that Liu Qing woke up as if from a dream, with an embarrassed look on his face, and said in a panic: "Good afternoon, two distinguished guests, please please come in."
Liu Qing, after all, has rich experience, and quickly calmed down from the panic and embarrassment: "Miss Li did call just now to inform you that you two should go in first. Here are ordinary refreshments. If there is any lack of hospitality"
"No need," Qi Yue nodded with a smile: "Just take us to see the child."
"Oh, that's good. The children have just returned to their rooms after lunch. The lunch break has just arrived, so they are probably not asleep yet. If you like any child and that child agrees, you can take him away directly. The formalities are all I will take care of everything. Please come with me." Liu Qing said respectfully.
"Take the child away?" Ling Chen looked at Qi Yue in surprise: "You're not here toadopt the child, are you? What's the situation?"
Qi Yue gave him a wink but said nothing. Following Liu Qing, he walked towards the orphans' residential area.
Although the orphanage established by the Li Group is not very luxurious, it is not simple either. Adopted children will each have their own room, rather than living in chaotic groups.
Through the windows, children¡¯s faces appeared in front of them. As Liu Qing said, the lunch break had just begun and the children had not fallen asleep yet. Most of them were playing with their toys. The oldest of these children is eight or nine years old, and the youngest is less than one year old. Some of them were abandoned by their parents due to illness and other reasons, some were homeless children, some suffered disasters at home when they were young, and their parents died
¡°The orphanage cannot be the forever home for these poor children. Having a pair of parents is the best destination for them. From time to time, some people will come to adopt children from here Of course, these adopters will be strictly reviewed by the Li family charity organization, and there will be a certain period of follow-up.
Today, Li Xiaoxue called Liu Qing to tell him that the two of them would adopt a child there.
Passing through one room after another, Qi Yue did not stop, and Ling Chen had no choice but to follow her in confusion.
Until she reached the corner room in the third row, Qi Yue stopped and turned her eyes to look at the child in the small room.
In the room, there is a little girl wearing a light yellow princess dress with two symmetrical braids on her head. She looks like she is only four or five years old. She is as pink and cute as a doll, and her big eyes are like twinkling stars in the sky when they blink. stars.
Hearing the movement outside, she also looked over. Unlike other children, this little girl gave them a faint sense of loneliness, and her beautiful eyes flashed with a stubbornness that was inconsistent with her age.
Looking at the little girl, Qi Yue's lips showed a touching smile, and she said to Liu Qing: "Aunt Liu, can I take this child away?"
"As long as she agrees, of course." Liu Qing hesitated for a moment, but reminded: "She is the most beautiful child here. When she was a child, her family experienced disasters and was helpless. She was sent here a year ago. Those who want to Good-hearted people who adopt children will basically notice her at first sight when they come here. But her character is a bit withdrawn and exclusive, and she is also a bit stubborn. Not to mention going with others, she can't even get close to others. So far, at least 40 or 50 people have My family wanted to adopt her, but she was unwilling, alas."
The implication is that the possibility that she will be willing to go with you is very, very small.
Qi Yue didn't care at all. She pushed the door in and walked to the little girl. She looked at her softly. The girl also opened her eyes wide and looked at her without blinking. Qi Yue He smiled and asked softly: "Little sister, what is your name? How old are you?"
"I" the little girl hesitated for a moment, and then answered in a clear voice: "My name is Little Xingxing, I am four years old."
"Little Xingxing? What a cute name, as cute as you." Qiyue bent down and brought her cheek closer to her: "Then, how about going home with your sister? My sister has the most beautiful home there. Lots of delicious food and lots of beautiful toys.¡±
Ling Chen: ""
Liu Qing thought she would still turn her head away as before, but beyond her expectation, she saw Little Xingxing blink her eyes lightly and nodded hard: "Yeah!"
"So good!" Qi Yue gently stroked the girl's little braid, then stretched out her arms and carefully picked her up: "Then, I went home with my sister Aunt Liu, the follow-up matters will be troublesome. is you."
"Ah good!"
lookAs the girl who no one could take away quietly lay in Qi Yue's arms and gradually went away, Liu Qing sighed for a while: She is really like a fairy, and even a child like Xiao Xingxing cannot resist such charm.
"Are youserious about adopting a child? Is it possible that you want to be a mother?" Ling Chen asked in confusion as he kept looking at the little girl Qi Yue was holding. He was not prepared at all for this matter.
"Being a mother? There's no rush yet." Qiyue smiled sweetly: "Didn't you hear me asking her to call me sister? Soon, she will also call you brother."
"Then what on earth are you"
"Husband, don't you want to be a loli and grow up?"
¡°¡You¡can¡¯t be serious, right?¡±
"Of course I'm serious. When she turns sixteen, let her be your little bed-warmer. When she gets older, there will be a big surprise, hehe."
Amid Qi Yue¡¯s mysterious and charming laughter, their figures slowly disappeared at the end of the road. In the distant sky, a full moon hung high, completely obscured by the light of the scorching sun It was the moon that Ling Chen, who had entered the Shinto, re-created with his power three years ago the most perfect moon.
¡ª¡ª¡ª¡ªComplete the book¡ª¡ª¡ª¡ª
?The following is the final remarks.
From September 30, 2012 to today, September 18, 2014, it took two years, and the scourge finally came to an end.
First of all, I sincerely and shamefully apologize to everyone.
Two years, less than 2.9 million words, these two figures are enough to show how bad my book is. There were so many interruptions that I couldn¡¯t even count myself. Any reason can only be an excuse, and I really can't find a reason to excuse myself.
The early days of Divine Punishment were fine, but from the early to mid-term, my condition became extremely bad. As soon as I sat in front of the computer and prepared to code, I would become irritated and disgusted. I thought this period would pass quickly, but unexpectedly it lasted for a long time. long time. This period of time can be said to be the worst period since I wrote. I am very tired from writing, and I believe everyone is also very tired. Because of myself, many people's moods have been affected to a certain extent, and I have always been extremely apologeticI am also extremely grateful to you for sticking with me even when Mars is in such a pit and at such a low point. Thank you very much. I will do my best to repay your tolerance and support.
Let¡¯s talk about the book God¡¯s Punishment. It was quite satisfactory in the early and middle stages. However, in the later stage, due to poor condition, too tired to write, and plot planning, I couldn¡¯t get out of my own thinking circle, so I had the idea of ??finishing it as soon as possible. Therefore, everyone must have noticed. , various dungeons, tasks, and trampling on people in the early stage, but after coming out of Xueming Tianchi, they all followed the main line.
In addition, the line of pets was written to waste by me. In "Shura", three pets were used throughout, and in "Evil Dragon", the four pets played a huge role until the final stage. As for "Category", after the plot in the game is over, they can be said to have basically disappeared. In fact, the original intention was definitely not like this. Everyone should have noticed that Xiao Hui was still at the Tianjue level in the end. There was a skill [Purple Linguang] that only appeared but was temporarily unusable. After Leng'er awakened the power of Pluto, several super moves It has never been used, the [Pale Flame] that is the fusion of Xi Ling's three fires has not been activated, Cai'er's most powerful songs of nature have not been used, Yingxue still has the final seven-tailed state, etc
But in the later stage, after the protagonist turned into a pseudo-Shura, his strength increased too much, which seriously pushed them away, making me unable to work on them for a while But having said that, not many people seemed to care about this. ah! o()o
In book reviews, post bars, and WeChat, many children raised some questions about divine punishment:
What is the origin of Xiao Hui This has been hinted and stated clearly in many aspects of the book. It is the descendant of the sacred Qilin and the lucky beast.
What properties does the Sun God Pearl have I really don¡¯t know this! Because in my original idea, the function of the Sun God Pearl was to appear in the final battle and activate the ultimate move [God-Killing Moon]. I didn¡¯t design its attribute OTZ at all, but you can DIY it by yourself
Why does Lachesis seem so much more powerful than the Moon of Scourge To this, I will say one thing: Let Lachesis destroy Qi Xing and let me see! (¨s¨Œ¨t)
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I apologize again, I should have deeply disappointed you
For your persistence, I will devote all my enthusiasm to the next book
Regarding the new book, it will be released on October 1st, and everyone can see it on the first day of National Day. During this period, from the day after tomorrow to September 30, I will successively release previews of some new books on the WeChat platformRead the chapters. The number of words will not be too many. It mainly explains some background, settings, characters, etc. I hope to get everyone's revision opinions. Of course, the most important reason for doing this is to get everyone's attention on WeChat (hehehehehe), because this is still very important to Mars. I hope everyone can add and follow "huoxingyinli99" on WeChat, or "huoxingyinli99" on public WeChat with verification Mars Gravity¡±. The title of the new book will also be announced on Tieba and WeChat during this period It has not been announced yet because the title has not yet been determined. These days, there are more people writing books than reading them. Finding a book title that is both readable and usable is harder than finding a fair-skinned, beautiful, and good-tempered wife! !
In the first month of the new book, I will beg for all kinds of votes to bring my long-dormant Hexi clan back to its former glory! I look forward to my dear friends fighting side by side with Mars Thank you.
¡October 1st, we are still on the Chinese website, see you in the new book!
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