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    It took Malone a full ten years to finally confirm that Daryl Ben-Hur did not harbor evil intentions, but had truly become haggard and lost his former ambitions, and just wanted to spend the rest of his life in a virtual pre-time travel world.

    And these ten years are enough for many, many things to happen.

    The bigger thing is that the civil war finally broke out in the Loling Republic Well, to be more precise, it should be a rebellion. The slave-owning class, unwilling to accept that their era was coming to an end, "under the instigation of domestic and foreign reactionary forces,"  Crazy attacks were launched across the country against the emerging bourgeoisie headed by the Marlon List Group.

    There is no way, under the guidance of n News' ten-year public opinion, and under the promotion of movies that show the evils of slavery and the extreme restriction of productivity, the slave liberation movement has become the mainstream ideological understanding of Luoling people in the past ten years.  , slave ownership has become a despicable profession despised by mainstream society.

    Faced with the accusations from thousands of people and the continuous escape and resistance of slaves, it has become inevitable for those slave owners who are basically not good people to retaliate against society for various reasons.

    However, because the situation was different after all, this small group of reactionary slave owners could not bring about a large-scale civil war like the one in the United States. Basically, they were extinguished as soon as they started to start a prairie fire.

    The remaining slave owners who were slightly smarter, driven by both profit and life threats, turned into enlightened people and gave slaves freedom, turning slaves into tenant farmers, and then either became feudal landlords or ran directly to safe cities.  Invest in industry and commerce.

    With Luoling¡¯s continuous deepening of reforms, when the tax reform finally succeeded, the entire country¡¯s economic cycle finally got on the right track.

    but.  Compared to Loring's economic reforms.  Under the guidance of Rowe's Little Red Book, the Helfa Empire has implemented its third five-year plan.  The pace is much larger.

    If you want to make an analogy, the Helfa Empire is like a porcelain country that implements state capitalism, while Luoling implements a free economy. The government does not support any industries and only uses taxes to build some infrastructure, and more  of public funds fell into the hands of politicians and families large and small.

    So in the year 4270 of the Bright Calendar, a classic movie called "Let the Bullets Fly" produced by DreamWorks said, "I'm telling you! The tax official had to create a clever name when he took office to win over the wealthy gentry to pay taxes and donations. If they pay, they can  Let the citizens pay the money, and after receiving the money, the gentry's money will be returned in full, and the citizens' money will be divided into 30 and 70" This line caused an uproar that swept the entire Luoling.

    Angry people began to demonstrate, demanding that the government disclose the use of every tax, otherwise they would use their votes to send certain people back to wherever they came from.

    And precisely at this time, in the Blackstone Fire Valley and Viratford Industrial Parks, which have prospered to the point where they each have a population of nearly 200,000, the "praise system" that has been implemented for a full ten years was also criticized by the media headed by n  .  It was reported on a large scale and compared with the current system.

    After ten years of implementation, the original government praise system was very simple.  The system has become more and more perfect under people's suggestions. Whether it is the officials headed by the National Development and Reform Commission or the government officials with taxpayers as the main body, they have the means to restrict and supervise each other.

    Once someone breaks the rules, the punishment will be severe.

    In the two autonomous regions of Blackstone Fire Valley and Villatford Industrial Park, there has never been a precedent for punishing crimes on the basis of so-called humanitarianism. Instead, severe punishment is used as a means, ranging from high fines to personal credit rating.  personnel files, to being whipped in public with magical effects so the scars can never be healed, to being deprived of political rights and deported for serious crimes, and finally, although it is infrequently carried out, it is carried out every time  The guillotine will cause a sensation and onlookers.

    At first, these harsh punishments also caused a backlash, but with the strong support of Ma Long, the big boss behind the scenes, the residents of Blackstone Fire Valley and Villatford Industrial Park finally understood the beautiful words of freedom, tranquility, and civilization.  , has never been an absolute truth but only a relative truth. If everyone wants to enjoy freedom without restraint, the final result will inevitably be mutual aggression.

    After getting used to the systems of Blackstone Valley of Fire and Villatford, these two residents, who are like a country within a country, look at the people outside. Shanghai Yin, a porcelain country, looks no different to people from other places Idiots  !  They are all unqualified and uncivilized bumpkins!

    ¡°Well, of course, it¡¯s okay to say that Beier has the arrogance of a steward of an empire on which the sun never sets.

    It is good to have a sense of pride. Pride can make people behave in a way that maintains the overall image consciously or unconsciously.

    In the earth world??, the white Europeans who were originally vulgar and regarded as uncivilized ghosts and barbarians, in modern history, because they successfully turned into serfs and sang songs, their culture and rules became universal rules, so they overall have a respect for Orientals and the  The psychological advantages of black people and other ethnic groups.

    In the process of being overthrown and in the process of getting back up again, the Porcelain Country, the original world leader, completely lost the psychological advantage of being a barbarian outside of China, which was originally proud of the world, and had an almost pathological attitude toward the West.  The fear and worship of foreigners, and then there are words such as "matchmaking", "foreign business", "foreign wealth", "foreign spirit", etc. that respect the foreign.

    That is to say, before and after Luo Wei's time travel, due to the continuous decline of the West and the re-emergence of the Porcelain Country, the mentality of respecting foreigners gradually diminished, but only gradually. After all, those inflammatory foreign slaves will still die for a while.  .

    Because he has a deep understanding of it, Rowe is quite aware of pride. He even somewhat indulges the residents of Blackstone Fire Valley and Villatford Industrial Park, showing off to outsiders their pride in seeing themselves as more civilized and advanced.

    Those intentional and unintentional displays of pride are indeed very effective.

    The first is Baisha City. Baisha City is crying and shouting that it must implement the same system as Blackstone Fire Valley and Villatford. The reason for the residents of Baisha City is that Malone is from Baisha City, so how can they ignore Baisha City, their home city?  Do not ask?

    Malone certainly has no problem with this.  Those who have objections are those corrupt and bribery officials in Baisha City.  Once the same system as Blackstone Valley of Fire and Villatford is implemented.  The good days of covering up the sky with one hand and enriching their own pockets are coming to an end. This is unacceptable!  Absolutely unacceptable!

    However, after ten years of life and ten years of lessons, the power of the Apocalypse sect in Baisha City, which worships the Lord of Apocalypse, has grown to such an extent that almost no one can control it. Therefore, those officials who are jumping up and down trying to prevent the transformation of the black stone into a valley of fire in Baisha City,  One after another, they shut up. Some of them are heroes who know the current affairs, and some shut up forever.

    And then?  Half a million Baisha citizens are celebrating the increase in oil pricesah, no, they are celebrating the inauguration of new relevant departments such as the National Development and Reform Commission and the Commission for Discipline Inspection.

    Ma Long also participated in the unveiling and establishment ceremonies of these relevant departments. Not only did Ma Long attend the ceremony himself, but he also brought his little lolita with him. Over the past ten years, the Malone family's little lolita has been transferred from Amy to Ah.  Della and Malone's love child "Hathaway".

    Hathaway, who inherited Adela's appearance, also inherited Adela's good character. Of course, she is particularly sticky and well-behaved.

    Ten years ago, Amy was still a half-grown fox loli. Ten years later, Amy has a mature figure due to sufficient nutrition.  Malone and Amy finally got married in the second year after Hathaway was born.

    But because Marlon has always felt pity for Amy's young age, and because Amy is busy with singing performances in the Illidan group and participating in movies, etc.  Amy is not pregnant yet.

    But this does not mean that Ma Long has no other heirs.

    Yes, in addition to Hathaway, a purple-eyed little lolita, Malone also has an illegitimate daughter named "Julie" who is just two and a half years old. Julie's mother is Polo Mi.

    Although Tuoluomi repeatedly claimed that Julie was the result of Malone overthrowing her after drinking and having sex, Malone could not think of any wine that could overthrow him as a demigod, and even allowed him to have sex with him in a drunken state.  Romy crossed himself in circles at least four times

    Therefore, Ma Long has always been very suspicious that the drunken sex claimed by Ptolomy was actually not drunken sex at all, but that Ptolomy drugged him.

    But even if Ma Long was full of doubts about this kind of thing, when he heard Tolomi's strong words, "I just want to have a child with you, can't I?", he could only pinch his nose and admit defeat.  .

    After knowing that Tuoluomi was pregnant, Ma Long wanted to marry Tuoluomi back home. Unfortunately, his proposal was directly rejected by Tuoluomi as soon as he made it.

    "Why should I marry you and be your little wife? It's obviously better like this now. The child is mine, the money is mine, and the power is mine. As for you, Ma Long If I am in a good mood,  , I will recruit you to sleep with me!"

    Tuoluomi's words of rejection made Ma Long more firm in his speculation that he was raped.

    "What? Do you want to be ruthless? If you dare not come to bed, I will find another man to take your place. Believe it or not?"

    Seeing Ma Long¡¯s expression of constipation, Tuoluomi chuckled and threatened.

    "you dare!"

    Ma Long shouted loudly. His possessiveness may be strong or weak, but at least he absolutely cannot accept that his woman actually has another man.

    ? ?"Hehe, feed me, I won't dare"

    ??Polomi swayed her cat tail, her eyes as charming as silk.

    I can¡¯t bear it!

    No man can bear this situation!

    So when Ma Long regained his senses, he was already naked and had sex with Tolomi again

    In this way, Ma Long had another daughter, an openly illegitimate daughter.

    Therefore, Ma Long planned to go to Tuoluomi¡¯s manor to see Julie after attending the unveiling ceremony of the White Sofa Reform Committee and other relevant departments.

    But before Malone could move, he received good news from the Ulysses Research Center. After a long period of time and massive investment of funds, the home puppet department of the Ulysses Research Center finally developed a low-priced  A household puppet that ordinary families can afford.

    According to Malone¡¯s knowledge, unless all intelligent creatures enter an immortal energy form, there will always be a relationship of exploitation.

    In primitive times, low productivity allowed intelligent creatures to cooperate with each other to exploit nature; in slave society, people who mastered violence could finally exploit slaves; in the feudal eralandlords exploited tenant farmers, and tenant farmers exploited livestock and themselves.

    Then there is the machine industry.  Landowners became factory owners.  Sharecroppers became workers.  Livestock become machines.

    But no matter how things change, there will always be some people who are exploited and cannot be freed. The exploitation of others cannot be eradicated.

    That¡¯s why Malone invested a lot of manpower and material resources and asked the Ulysses Research Center to develop robots that completely changed the era. Well in this other world, they are called household puppets.

    When these puppet robots become popular on a large scale, the system of human exploitation of human beings will be irreversibly gone, because the lowest exploited class will become unable to abide by the three laws of robots.  A robot that doesn't complain about its miserable fate of being exploited.

    Of course, you have to eat one bite at a time and walk one step at a time. Ma Long still understands the truth that if you take too big a step, you will lose your eggs. He will definitely not promote household robots all at once, but will make money at a high price first in line with business principles.  Then slowly reduce the price little by little.

    With this in mind, Malone hurried to the Ulysses Research Center, which had been expanded into a twin building. However, what Malone saw was not a cheap household robot, but a blurry explosion scene.

    "You're here just in time, Malone. There's bad news and good news. Which one do you want to hear first?"

    The head of the Ulysses Research Center who is still dressed like a black duke.  That is to say, the Dracolich Giordano Bruno pointed at the explosion site and said that he was obviously within the explosion site just now.  So all his clothes turned into beggar's clothes.

    "bad news."

    Malone replied.

    "The bad news is that the domestic puppet No. 911 had a serious explosion. The reason was that when a few idiots loaded it with a mobile signal receiving device, they violated the prescribed operating procedures and left scratches on the magic circuit that should not have been left.  "Giordano Bruno reached out and pointed at the corpses next to the explosion site, and then said in a accustomed tone: "So, these idiots have tasted the taste of death."

    "I hope that after they are resurrected, they will not be eager to die again because of the punishment system of the research center and the cost of resurrection."

    Malone commented that if the casualty accident was caused by violating the prescribed operating procedures, he would naturally not have much sympathy. Moreover, explosions in experiments causing casualties of researchers really happened every once in a while at the Ulysses Research Center.  What will happen is that if there is no death in the Ulysses Research Center in any month, the newspapers in Baisha City will seriously treat it as an anecdote and report it with the title "The God of Death is on vacation this month".

    "Punishment? No, no, no, they should not be punished, they should be rewarded! The highest reward!"

    The Dragon Lich danced and rejected Ma Long's statement.

    "Why? Did this accident lead to some major new discovery?"

    The high level of attention paid to the Ulysses Research Center made Malone immediately think of this possibility.

    "Yes, this is also the good news I want to tell you, Ma Long!"

    The Dracolich made a gesture to please go this way, and without thinking, Ma Long followed the other party's guidance and entered another laboratory with a higher level of confidentiality.

    Entering the high-security laboratory, Ma Long saw a large piece of burnt black debris that should obviously belong to the household puppet No. 911 in the explosive laboratory outside.

    "This is the core mechanical demon of the household puppet. It originally moved the signalThe absorption device should be loaded here. Although the core mechanical demon appeared to be seriously damaged after the explosion, in fact it was only the surface that was damaged, and because of the wrong markings and explosion damage, it accidentally possessed an  Functions that were not originally available.  "

    The Dragon Lich walked to the charred remains of the mechanical demon spirit of Household Puppet No. 911, and then stuffed a charged magic crystal into the mechanical demon device.

    The charred remains of the mechanical demon lit up, and then blue arcs of electricity wrapped the remains of the mechanical demon into a ball of lightning in a very short period of time due to energy leakage.

    "Okay, you can come and try Ma Long."

    The Dracolich said this after finishing the preparations.

    "try what?"

    Ma Long didn¡¯t quite understand what Dracolich meant.

    "Try to touch these arcs and you'll notice something interesting, I promise"

    Dragon Lich replied.

    So, Luo Wei did as he was told. He stepped forward and touched the blue arcs with his hands.  But those arcs seemed to suddenly come to life.  It quickly clung to Luo Wei's body.  Turning Luo Wei into an electric man.

    Amidst the lightning, Ma Long's eyes widened in surprise, because he saw something he had never dreamed of.

    Earth!

    Luo Wei saw the earth!

    Even, as long as Luo Wei continues to sink his consciousness, he can instantly enter the atmosphere directly from outside the atmosphere, and see the bustling earth full of human beings from a height of hundreds of meters!

    Thishow is this possible?  !

    Such a surprising thing made Ma Long surprised. This familiar earth world was the only thing that made Ma Long feel different.  Just countless little pale golden light groups flying everywhere

    However, when Malone wanted to see the earth more closely, an irresistible force dragged him back from behind. Before he was rushed from the earth world and back to the laboratory of the Ulysses Research Center, Malone subconsciously  He stretched his hand forward and caught a small ball of light that happened to fly past him.

    "Fifty thousand units of charged magic crystals only lasted less than ten minutes. What on earth did you see?"

    The voice of the Dragon Lich came from beside Ma Long.

    "I saw" Malone paused for a moment before finally saying, "A world."

    "I saw a world? What did that world look like? Well I guess you couldn't see it clearly either. I only saw a small fragment of a plane with people moving around, and it was dragged back from a distance of a thousand meters.  ." Dragon Lich was not surprised.  After all, he had already had the same experience, and then he saw the ball of light in Ma Long's hand: "Huh? What is this? It seems to be the soul of an unbeliever? However, even if it is an unbeliever, such a weak person  The strength of the soul is also too low, and it looks like it may dissipate at any time.¡±

    "Well, it is indeed the soul of the unbelieving."

    Ma Long nodded, and then the soul he held in his hand dissipated just as the Dracolich said.

    "What a pathetic creature."

    The dracolich showed limited mercy.

    Ma Long did not answer the question, because while the souls he captured dissipated, he obtained some memories that belonged to him through the dissipated souls. He was killed in a car accident while traveling, and then his soul wandered because of his lack of faith.  A memory that cannot rest in peace.

    The name of this unlucky guy is Liu Xiaoqiang. He is a sophomore at Pheasant Private University. His home address is Mohe, Heilongjiang, and his character is timid and cowardly

    "This is?!" Malone heard the exclamation coming from his body, and the owner of the exclamation, the goddess of hunting and celebration, Ashelia: "Marlon Liszt, where did you find this strange thing?"  Soul? He can be absorbed directly by me!"

    "Huh? Are you sure you're not joking?"

    Using the method of spiritual communication, Ma Long asked in an aggravated tone.

    Souls that can be directly absorbed by gods are actually of a much higher quality than those who pray for merging.

    "Why am I joking about this kind of thing? Wellthe only problem now is that the energy of this soul is too weak. I think this fragile soul should be a useless loser when it is alive?"

    Ashelia replied in the most stern tone. She even made speculations about the life of the unlucky Liu Xiaoqiang based on the feeling she got from the soul fragments she absorbed.

    "Marlon Lister, I have a way to strengthen these fragile souls."

    So after the speculation was completed, Ashelia??Said voluntarily and voluntarily.

    "Oh, come and listen."

    Ma Long responded noncommittally.

    "In the past, when my Kingdom of God Ashelia Courtyard was still there, I would hold a grand hunter night banquet every once in a while, and the only people who could enjoy this grand night banquet were those who passed the different battlefields I set and then succeeded.  The most courageous and skilled hunters who have arrived at the night banquet place. Well just like the virtual game you made called "Infinite Horror", the only difference is that your "Infinite Horror" is just a tool to make money, and mine  Every time you have a night banquet, you will get a lot of pure power of faith.¡±

    Ashelia said a lot.

    "If that's the case, then why do you still fall?"

    Ma Long¡¯s question was a bloody one.

    "That's why I go to hold hunter night banquets again and again."

    Ashelia replied.

    This answer seems to reverse cause and effect, but Luo Wei, who has also embarked on the road to becoming a god, understands that the power of mortal faith contains too many impurities.  And those too many impurities will affect the gods after accumulating too much.

    The purpose of Ashelia¡¯s hunter¡¯s night banquet.  In fact, it is not to reward the most courageous and skilled hunters who successfully arrive.  Rather, it is using this method to filter out the impurities in the power of faith of extraordinary people.

    Then, Ma Long recalled the mortal world under the heaven in the clouds of his pseudo-god kingdom, and the never-ending war between skeletons and dwarves.

    "I think I finally understand the true purpose of "Infinite Horror"."

    Ma Long, who already had an idea, said this.

    "What?"

    Ashelia asked cooperatively.

    "Esilia, please swear to be my god."

    Malone did not answer Ashelia¡¯s question, but suddenly said this.

    Ashelia was silent for a long time before asking one word: "Reason?"

    "You who guard the infinite world for me will receive a sufficient amount of soul energy dissipated due to the failure of the battle in the process of becoming stronger from extremely weak as a reward, and what I extract is only the part that belongs to the virtual war.  "

    Malone said.

    Ashelia was silent for a longer time before finally saying the answer Malone wanted: "Okay, I swear."

    The oath from God is very long, but the oath in the soul world only takes an extreme amount of time, so Luo Wei quickly got out of the state of soul communication, and he called out a name.

    "Tony Stark."

    A man in a suit, who was no longer young but looked like a bad boy, appeared next to Ma Long out of thin air: "I'm here. What can I do for you, my master?"

    "Analyze the principle of this thing."

    Ma Long pointed at the core of the charred mechanical demon spirit and said. While speaking, he connected the charred mechanical demon core with energy.  A small piece of memory that came to the earth was shared with Tony Stark, a rich, handsome, high-IQ, and high-tech playboy scientist.

    Yes, Tony Stark, the rich and handsome man, is the guy named Iron Man.

    "As you wish."

    Tony Stark, who received Malone's memory, happily accepted the task.

    ¡­¡­

    Another three years have passed by in a hurry. In the past three years, the thirty young dragons of Longkong Mountain finally broke out of their shells, and Neftuaikra, the descendant of Esiliya who was hiding in the ancient tomb of Ximogan, was in seclusion.  Meng also finally broke out.

    After Neftuaiklamon broke through, there was a new sect called the Gate of Truth in Luoling, and the first doctrine of this sect is

    "Whoever believes in me will have eternal life."

    When Ma Long learned about this teaching, Ma Long, who already had three children, suddenly remembered the pure man he had forgotten long ago.

    Just as Malone expected, the emergence of the thirty young dragons and the Gate of Truth sect forced the Immortal Council, which originally paid close attention to Malone, to constantly allocate power to deal with the increasingly powerful Gate of Truth sect.

    There is no other way. The Gate of Truth sect, which uses pyramid schemes to preach, is brainwashing and expanding too fast!

    ¡°Compared to the brainwashing pyramid schemes of those empty-handed white wolves, the God of Truth that Door of Truth believes in constantly sends down divine grace to prove that it is definitely not an evil god but a true God!

    What surprised Malone the most was that Neftuaikramon, who was transformed into the God of Truth, said that the chosen prophet was none other than Adam Kirkcady, who had a great feud with the Immortal Council and could not resolve it!

      Therefore, the war between the Gate of Truth and the Immortal Parliament was doomed from the day the Gate of Truth appeared.

    At first, the Immortal Council still had the upper hand, but when Neftuaikramon set up a clever plan and single-handedly killed almost the Immortal Knights of the Immortal Council, the balance of power between the two was completely reversed.

    In this battle, Malone and his Apocalypse Sect finally emerged from behind the scenes. If it weren't for Malone's assistance, the results of the battle of Neftuaiklamon, the God of Truth, would not have been so brilliant.

    But the war has only just begun.

    The irreconcilable conflict between religion and belief finally plunged the Luoling Republic into a complete civil war. However, in just over ten years, the Immortal Parliament was completely eradicated, along with most of the Millennium Family.

    At this time, Ma Long was finally able to spread the systems implemented in his three places, Baisha City, Blackstone Fire Valley, and Villatford, to the whole of Luoling.

    But Ma Long never appeared in front of the stage, but continued to improve his own Kingdom of God.

    Another hundred years passed, and finally the last moment came. It was time for Ma Long to become a god and go to heaven.

    Instead of being heartless and declaring himself a god, Ma Long transformed all his wives into the Holy Spirit. Then, in full view of the public and with the sound of hymns resounding through the sky, he slowly rose up on five-color auspicious clouds, flying higher and farther, until  Those who look up can no longer see anything

    And this country called Luoling is no longer withered and dilapidated as it was when Malong first came. Instead, it has become a country where tall buildings are everywhere under the protection of hard-working civilian puppets. People live and work in peace and contentment, and the old and young are supported.  A good group Datong World.

    Complete book, complete

    After finishing writing, a certain wizard wanted to say something, but didn¡¯t know where to start

    "This book "Monopoly in Another World", a certain wizard was full of confidence when he opened the book and vowed to write a perfect ending, so he set up those posts that guaranteed to compensate fans.

    "But, a certain wizard's luck is reallyheh, so good.

    When the original writing was getting better, my wife's sudden premature birth directly disrupted the rhythm. As a husband, I can't continue to shrink in front of the computer and type. Instead, I have to stay in the hospital and stay with my wife, waiting for her to feel better.  It was easy to be discharged from the hospital and go home for confinement, but the baby had to stay in the hospital because of premature birth and severe jaundice. This lasted for half a month.

    After the child was discharged from the hospital, my wife and I, two novices, were left with the child every day. The premature child was so weak that it made me feel distressed as a father. I was even worried that the child would suddenly die that month  time, a certain wizard finally understood how heavy the responsibility and hard work of being a parent is.

    Then, under careful care, a certain wizard's son finally grew up healthily.

    A certain wizard could finally relax and start coding again, for the money for milk powder and for the promise of hanging on the book. But misfortune befell a certain wizard again. A certain wizard's wife was hospitalized again and had two surgeries in a row.  Once I was hospitalizedit took another half a month.

    When a certain wizard who was exhausted physically and mentally could finally sit in front of the computer again, the story of the story of "Monopoly" that he had once conceived had long been forgotten. A certain wizard even had to read the previous chapters over and over again.  Find the names of the supporting actors.

    At the most serious point, a certain wizard had a strong urge to grab his hair and throw the computer out of the window after opening the document By the time this article was written, it was no longer just fun, but a complete and utter urge.  What a torture to the soul.

    But there is no way. Since a certain wizard has said that he needs at least two million words, he must grit his teeth and continue writing even if his heart feels like thousands of cats scratching him, because since he has made a promise, he must keep his word.  .

    "I just managed to hold on until today. Today, I finally wrote two million words. A certain wizard really couldn't hold on and had to finish the book.

    The reason is very simple: a certain wizard has to support his wife and children, and the 24-hour subscription for this book has already dropped below 300, and he has stopped making money.  (To be continued)
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