I saw many book friends complaining about the poor ending, so I felt it was necessary to say a few words. If it¡¯s because I didn¡¯t go to the world of cultivation or immortality to complain about the poor ending, I can¡¯t say, because the book itself is positioned as an urban novel, and it should be normal for it not to go to the world of cultivation or immortality.
Of course, it is undeniable that the ending of this book is a bit rushed. If we really want to start writing, this book can be longer. After all, there are many things in life that can be written, and there are also novels that can be written abroad, with tens of millions of words. . But after the book was written in Beijing, in fact, if the reader is interested, he should be able to feel that the story has passed the highest point of the protagonist's pretentiousness. Because basically everyone who knows Mr. Zhang already knows what is unusual about him, and the people he has made friends with have reached a very high level. If you want to continue writing and show off, you will definitely have to introduce new people and new lines. But from the perspective of my personal writing status, if I really want to continue writing like this, my writing status will definitely turn from passion to suffering, and I am writing purely for money. In the end, it may not be me who ends the book, but you who end the book directly. If it really comes to this point, it should be the author's sorrow.
If you compare writing a book to falling in love, I feel that by the end of the book, the love period has passed, and you should get married next. The days after marriage are warm and long, but lack the passionate ups and downs of love, so I think the story is almost the same when it comes to "marriage".
As for the heroine, apart from collecting the leaves for the bird, the other four have already decided to collect them. As for Bai Jie, Lu Yafen and others, whether they will accept them or not is actually a matter of opinion. If it is included, some people may think that the two female hosts should also be included, as well as the girls from Wuyishan, and the mixed-race beauties. Some people may think that the protagonist's harem is too powerful, so they will be included. The end is there, let book friends think about it, everyone's favorite heroine is different, maybe some people will not choose Bai Jie, maybe some people like the female host, and maybe some people think it is enough.
If I were asked to write and collect, I would choose Lu Yafen, I like her better.
Of course, I still have to admit that the ending is a bit hasty, and I would like to apologize to all the book friends who have always supported this book.