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- The current revision progress has reached 80 chapters, and there are still 16 chapters to be revised for the free part of the entire public chapter.
Over the past few days, I have changed ten chapters every day. Looking back, I found many places that I didn't think were problems at first, but were actually problems.
A lot of nonsense has been deleted, and a lot of typos have been fixed.
A total of nearly 10,000 words of public chapters should be deleted.
I was reluctant to delete it before, but now I look at it with the reader's mentality, and I dare to delete it.
Hey After all, the mentality determines the degree of cruelty.
Even so, those who don't like it still don't like it, and those who should spray it still spray it.
Frankly speaking, I was really speechless by those people, such as Xiao Xun'er's meme.
I listed all the characters, but some people said that they didn't know Xiao Xun'er would appear until they read ten chapters.
Then a lot of complaints.
Another example is that the power system is chaotic. I can only say that I have already listed the power that should be available and planned the strength.
If this still feels messy, I seriously doubt that they pretend to be cultural people before they graduate from elementary school.
In the end, I personally think that the story line of this book is relatively clear.
In order to facilitate the recall of book friends who are still reading, I will summarize the story lines that have appeared in this book.
in chronological order
? 2011.4 Niu Renyi came to this world.
? 2011.5 Niu Renyi joined the Kyoto No. 3 Middle School baseball team,
? 2011.5 Niu Renyi was accepted as a non-staff member by Section S of the Kyoto National Security Group.
? 2011.7 Niu Renyi and Amanomoto Sakura became partners.
? 2011.8 Niu Renyi's first karate middle school individual champion.
? 2012.5 Niu Renyi led the baseball team to stop in the Kansai Grand Prix.
? 2012.7 Niu Renyi won the national karate championship for the second time and killed the blood clan for the first time in the same month.
Niu Renyi and Misaka Mashiro performed together at the school festival.
The song that Niu Renyi plagiarized was taken by Tenda Entertainment.
"Youth" was sung popular by Hoshino Qilai in the island country
? 2013.5 Niu Renyi led his team to win the Kansai competition.
(from the perspective of the main character)
? 2013.8.6 (evening) Niu Renyi discovered that he could extract rewards from the game on the eve of the game.
? 2013.8.7 (afternoon) Niu Renyi scored the winning point in the national competition.
? 2013.8.7 (the competition is nearing the end) Niu Renyi met Xiao Xun'er.
? On August 7, 2013 (the end of the game was approaching dusk), Misaka Mashiro took the initiative to kiss Niu Renyi at the awards ceremony
? 2013.8.7 (17:00-18:00) Niu Renyi met Rem and the National Security Group Honma Constitutional War because of Chika Kitahara.
? 2013.8.7 (18:00-19:00) Niu Renyi rescued Rem, took him back to the hotel, and met Zhenbai.
? 2013.8.7 (19:00-20:00) Niu Renyi and Pei Qian met for the first time, met Longzu Qingchen, and witnessed the battle between Mrs. Qingchen and Jiugong Huiye,
? 2013.8.7 (20:00-22:30) Niu Renyi and Zhenbai reached an agreement, and then went to Xiao Xun'er's room to practice Dou Qi, and completed three kinds of Dou Qi training
2013.8.7 (22:30-12:00) When Niu Renyi took Xiao Xun'er to buy clothes in a department store, he ran into Qingling, and learned from the fat man that there was a giant egg from another world.
? 2013.8.8 (0:00-4:50) After Niu Renyi saw Fatty¡¯s cheats (Delin and Ampere), he suppressed his sleepiness and played the game "Fate Night" in order to survive.
Extracted other skills and summoned Gilgamesh.
? 2013.8.8 (4:50¡ª5:15) Gilgamesh was headshot, and Niu Renyi was told that he would attend the Hongmen Banquet at night.
2013.8.8 (5:15-6:30) Niu Renyi cleared the King of Fighters 97 and extracted the Kusanagi Kyo template.
2013.8.8 (6:40-7:30) Niu Renyi found out that Fatty had been transformed and was told that he became popular because of Qianhua's video confession.
? 2013.8.8 (7:30-15:50) Niu Renyi extracted from King of Fighters 97, 98, 2002, and 2013 respectively and other rewards related to King of Fighters.
? 2013.8.8 (15:50-16:30) Niu Renyi replenished Jin Shining's magic.
2013.8.8 (16:30-18:30) Niu Renyi discovered that Mashiro and Ikki had become Jinzhuli, and took Minister Mashiro's car to Karuizawa Villa.
?2013.8.8 (18:30-20:30)
Under Zhenbai's instruction, Niu Renyi cooks and cooks live, and takes the opportunity to brush up skills to earn skill points.
At the same time, Chiyoda Scola destroyed the plan.
? On August 8, 2013 (20:30), Niu Renyi took Qingling hostage in Qingchen's face.
(to be continued)
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